ext_24251 ([identity profile] becky-writing.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] criminalxminds2010-12-27 05:14 pm

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Title: Officer Down!
Author: [livejournal.com profile] becky_h
Characters: Hotch-centric. Morgan, Reid.
Genre: Gen, H/c.
Rating: R
Word Count: 2,000
Warnings: Violence and gore. Ambiguous ending.
Summary: Shots fired, officer down.
Author’s Notes: This was my Christmas present to myself. Unapologetic sadism toward fake people and Hotch-Reid Hurt/Comfort.
( Being shot is more about surprise than pain, at least at first. It’s a hard, precise shove that knocks you back or sideways or down. Even if you’re in the middle of a shoot-out, dodging bullets, it’s always unexpected and shocking. )

[identity profile] mighty-quill.livejournal.com 2010-12-27 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice. I liked how you took us through what was happening to Hotch...I'm not going to say this right...rather than what was just happening.

Does that make sense?

Either way, tres bon, mon ami.