ext_36585 ([identity profile] full-metal-ox.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] criminalxminds 2012-11-19 07:52 pm (UTC)

I'll agree that the action was rather confusing*, but falling on an explosive is such a common war-movie trope (and real-life tactic (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Falling_on_a_grenade)) that I assumed that that was what happened.

*And perhaps intentionally so, given that we're dealing with a stressful situation in unfamiliar (to the viewpoint characters) surroundings, reported from multiple points of view. I recall a workshop from Confluence 2011 on writing battlefield scenes, and Tamora Pierce's haunting metaphor for the common soldier's perspective:

It's like the blind men and the elephant--only the elephant has gone musth and is trying to kill everything within reach.


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