ext_21468: (reid's lips)
lady angel ([identity profile] dameange.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] criminalxminds2009-04-14 11:18 pm

In desperate need of . . .

A First Reader.

I need someone who is well versed in BOTH Criminal Minds and Merlin (the BBC version).

I'm participating in the [livejournal.com profile] boxofmagic Merlin Big Bang and chose to do a Criminal Minds/Merlin xover. I need someone to read over what I have of my story and tell me things like:

1. Boring! Hate it!
2. Good in these parts, not so great in these others.
3. Needs a little something here.
4. Doood, this is totally NOT something [insert character name here] would say! Or they wouldn't say it like that!

So, yeah, well versed in both fandoms is a total must. Also? The story is mostly Arthur/Merlin with a dash of Hotch/Reid, just FYI.


Sooooooo, if anyone is interested and able, I would greatly appreciate any and all constructive criticism given. Leave me your email addy in the comments and I'll send you what I have of the story so far. Thank you!

Note: I am *not* looking for a beta reader/editor at this time. So if you're not into doing that, that's not a problem. But if you are and are willing, I would love to have you on board as a beta reader as well.

[identity profile] cimera.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
Hi! I'm a fan of Criminal Minds and Merlin and I'd love to take a look at your story and provide some feedback. Further qualifications available on request... :) :)
My email: cimera@livejournal.com

[identity profile] cimera.livejournal.com 2009-04-16 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
They're icon twins, separated at birth and finally reunited...it's a heart warming tale :) :)

[identity profile] openmoments.livejournal.com 2009-04-16 09:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sure they're both crying over tea and crumpets as we speak. And lookie. It's the awesome-ness that is the Piemaker. LOL!

[identity profile] norinoricat.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
I'm a fan of both and would be willing to help you out.

email- fictionalitylove@gmail.com

[identity profile] norinoricat.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Hi! Yes I have it and I'm in the process of reading over it it's just taken a long time since I've been busy over the past few days.

[identity profile] al-hazel.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 11:23 am (UTC)(link)
I can be a first reader, if you need. Email me at alison.pen@hotmail.com. I avidly watch both shows...
Edited 2009-04-15 11:29 (UTC)

[identity profile] hollyxu.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm looking forward to seeing how you're going to combine the two fandoms. :D

(If you still need a first reader, just message me through lj's system.)