In desperate need of . . .

[dameange.livejournal.com]

A First Reader.

I need someone who is well versed in BOTH Criminal Minds and Merlin (the BBC version).

I'm participating in the boxofmagic Merlin Big Bang and chose to do a Criminal Minds/Merlin xover. I need someone to read over what I have of my story and tell me things like:

1. Boring! Hate it!
2. Good in these parts, not so great in these others.
3. Needs a little something here.
4. Doood, this is totally NOT something [insert character name here] would say! Or they wouldn't say it like that!

So, yeah, well versed in both fandoms is a total must. Also? The story is mostly Arthur/Merlin with a dash of Hotch/Reid, just FYI.


Sooooooo, if anyone is interested and able, I would greatly appreciate any and all constructive criticism given. Leave me your email addy in the comments and I'll send you what I have of the story so far. Thank you!

Note: I am *not* looking for a beta reader/editor at this time. So if you're not into doing that, that's not a problem. But if you are and are willing, I would love to have you on board as a beta reader as well.

Comments

[cimera.livejournal.com]

Hi! I'm a fan of Criminal Minds and Merlin and I'd love to take a look at your story and provide some feedback. Further qualifications available on request... :) :)
My email: cimera@livejournal.com

[openmoments.livejournal.com]

ICON!

[cimera.livejournal.com]

They're icon twins, separated at birth and finally reunited...it's a heart warming tale :) :)

[openmoments.livejournal.com]

I'm sure they're both crying over tea and crumpets as we speak. And lookie. It's the awesome-ness that is the Piemaker. LOL!

[dameange.livejournal.com]

Cimera, hello! Just wanted to drop a note here to let you know that I sent yu the first few chapters of the story from my yahoo account, just in case (I've been having problems with my email). The email should have the subject line: CM Merlin Big Bang (or something similar) and it should be from larabeelover @ yahoo . com / lady angel. Please let me know if you didn't get it. I look forward to hearing from you, LA

[norinoricat.livejournal.com]

I'm a fan of both and would be willing to help you out.

email- fictionalitylove@gmail.com

[dameange.livejournal.com]

Fictionality, hi there! Just wanted to drop a note here to let you know that I sent yu the first few chapters of the story from my yahoo account, just in case (I've been having problems with my email). The email should have the subject line: CM Merlin Big Bang (or something similar) and it should be from larabeelover @ yahoo . com / lady angel. Please let me know if you didn't get it. I look forward to hearing from you, LA

[norinoricat.livejournal.com]

Hi! Yes I have it and I'm in the process of reading over it it's just taken a long time since I've been busy over the past few days.

[al-hazel.livejournal.com]

I can be a first reader, if you need. Email me at alison.pen@hotmail.com. I avidly watch both shows...

[dameange.livejournal.com]

Alison, hi! Just wanted to drop a note here to let you know that I sent yu the first few chapters of the story from my yahoo account, just in case (I've been having problems with my email). The email should have the subject line: CM Merlin Big Bang (or something similar) and it should be from larabeelover @ yahoo . com / lady angel. Please let me know if you didn't get it. I look forward to hearing from you, LA

[hollyxu.livejournal.com]

I'm looking forward to seeing how you're going to combine the two fandoms. :D

(If you still need a first reader, just message me through lj's system.)

[dameange.livejournal.com]

Holly, thanks for the interest in the story. I can only hope I do a good job of combining the two. Also, thank you for the offer but it looks like I should be okay, thank you anyway!