Would definitely like feedback on characterization, esp. on the members of the BAU. Grammar and possibly spelling is a definite necessity, since mine sucks.
I would also like to know if the ending works. As mentioned, I had to rush the ending due to the deadline. (fic was only supposed to be 1500 words and it ended up being over 5000 already.)
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Date: Nov. 11th, 2010 11:17 am (UTC)Would definitely like feedback on characterization, esp. on the members of the BAU.
Grammar and possibly spelling is a definite necessity, since mine sucks.
I would also like to know if the ending works. As mentioned, I had to rush the ending due to the deadline. (fic was only supposed to be 1500 words and it ended up being over 5000 already.)