CriminalxMinds @ LJ

I love the depths into which you delve so efficiently in this story. I've said it before but I'm saying it again; the feelings and emotional reactions are shockingly real, and I love how you're building up and retaining a contant tension in each chapter. One wonders how it will be solved, because I anticipate a long, careful and just as beautiful resolution throughout. Maybe you'd consider looking for a beta-reader, there are quite some tiny things that stick out, although nothing big enough to disrupt the flow. Keep up the great writing. :)