Well, I tried to borrow the format and style, but naturally different things jump out at each of us; I agree that isn't a bad thing.
Bear's much much better at the themes/subtext recognition though, but I hope to improve - that's why feedback is so important to me; I'm hoping to elicit other people's thoughts and perspectives.
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Date: Jun. 30th, 2011 02:49 pm (UTC)Well, I tried to borrow the format and style, but naturally different things jump out at each of us; I agree that isn't a bad thing.
Bear's much much better at the themes/subtext recognition though, but I hope to improve - that's why feedback is so important to me; I'm hoping to elicit other people's thoughts and perspectives.