beta?

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I need a beta for a short piece I've written - I don't know if this is the place to ask for one, but I'll give it a shot - Just let me know if I should delete this.

It's a short piece, gen, first story in what will hopefully be a series. I'm not an native English-speaker, so apart from betaing there might be a need for some grammar-ish work.

Thanks in advance for offering:P

Starting off with a bang..

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First parts first, and the second will be behind a cut because it's a rant on the trailer for next week :)

Name: Heather
Age: 32 (Make a crack and I will beat you with my cane)
Location: Indianapolis
Favorite TV Show: Supernatural
Other Shows Watched: Law and Order SVU, Bones, House, Supernatural, NCIS
Favorite Quote: (I assumed you wanted a quote from the TV Show, if not I can provide many more ;>) "Hotch, I was a twelve year old child prodigy in a Las Vegas public high school. You kick like a nine year old girl."
Favorite Color: Dark green
If I was a criminal, I'd be... Aiming for the perfect crime

Now the rant. To preface, I like Reid. I like the fact he is socially inept, and has no idea what to do with anything about the opposite sex - and I love how the writers keep to that for him and make it an ongoing struggle, and mentioned in an aside on the episodes. Reid is the "non-pretty boy" of the group - he's a genuis, but socially having no clue.

Now - ( Next week's episode ranting...warning: spoiler bits )

MY NEW T-SHIRT

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( Yes, it's him. )

I special ordered it. It's beautiful.

*Cross-posted from my personal journal.

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First of all, they definitely played Jeff Buckley's Hallelujah in last nights episode! As much as it used in almost ever TV show and movie, I still like that they played it =D But I could have sworn they used it earlier in the season. I could be thinking of a whole other show though, am I mistaken? Does anyone happen to have that website that lists music played in TV shows and movies by any chance?

Also, I'm wondering, how is Criminal Minds doing with the ratings? I've heard various things really, so I don't actually know, but I'm assuming it's doing better than it was when it started.

I'm so damn excited for the next episode, it looks fantastic!

Edit: I found the website. The specific one for Criminal Minds is here.

Alternate Ending to "A Real Rain" from shooting script

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I bought a copy of the shooting script for "A Real Rain" at an auction, and it has a slightly modified ending. But I thought it was interesting, so if you want to read it, feel free to ( SPOILER ALERT )